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please read my sci-fi short story and tell me what you think?

ok mabey it if a little long…srry
ok mabey it is a little long…srry

wow that was relly good and your brave for putting it online, some @ssholes are gonna make fun of it but i think its so sweet

10 Responses to “please read my sci-fi short story and tell me what you think?”

1. babiigurl says:

   September 1, 2009 at 2:00 am

   its really long and good
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2. ilovegirlpantsonguys says:

   September 1, 2009 at 2:36 am

   wow that was relly good and your brave for putting it online, some @ssholes are gonna make fun of it but i think its so sweet
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3. dannie says:

   September 1, 2009 at 2:47 am

   It was long but it was worth reading. Awesome job!
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4. Lovepurple says:

   September 1, 2009 at 3:21 am

   I guess people that like science fiction would like this, but it is not my kind of thing. It is written well though. Good luck with it.
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5. ks lover says:

   September 1, 2009 at 3:56 am

   nice but i tought u said SHORT
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6. basketballplayer says:

   September 1, 2009 at 4:31 am

   its super long and i couldne finish it. sry
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7. Gangsta Geek says:

   September 1, 2009 at 5:05 am

   Logan for academic purposes that was good but other then tht i wouldn’t read it. wht is the title by the way?
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8. RaMOn says:

   September 1, 2009 at 5:13 am

   it was really good i especially like the part were the dogs attacked.
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   this story
9. emo:)jack says:

   September 1, 2009 at 5:25 am

   Ha. It’s good. Grammar is off though. Guess that’s what happens when it is a rough draft. Stop switching tenses for goodness’ sake! : )

   in loving memory of Jack
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10. logan says:

    September 1, 2009 at 5:51 am

    i loved it, great work
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